Thursday, December 11, 2008

The Final Day...

Im walking in the sahara desert alone..
I feel my legs almost lost its strength..
I dint know how long I been walking…

All nights and days pass with no change…
Im looking all around to seek help…

I know im in desert…
And I know no one there…NO ONE..
But also…
Im searching around…still…
Ya im just searching…for nobody…

Ther were soo many cultures were existed…
Soo many kingdoms were happened…
Soo many people were lived here…

I could feel im getting slow on my walking…
I think im really tired…

I could realize the days I walked with my love…
But it’s rather slow…

I know I can’t get back those days…
But my heart still beats for it…
Still beats...
How many times I told it...
Hey useless…
Don’t just dreaming to get it back…
You can’t ever get it back…
I’m telling…still…

My love…
Im just failed to turn you face to me…
Im failed to made you comfort in everything…

Im walking alone…
It will be my blessed day if you are here with me…

I need you to be with me…at this very last moment…
To feel your softness…
To feel your touch by your point finger…
Which is still my first touch…
My love…
Don’t make it last too…

I know I cant make it only first touch on me…
I feel it going to be the last touch too…

I couldn’t move…
Ohhh my god…
I have stopped walking…
Hmmm…I expected…

Where are you my love…

I couldn’t reach your shadow …
I couldn’t hear u singing…

Am I getting blind???

Ohhh god….
Don’t do this to me…
Its not fair…

I begging you…
You don’t even need to change my fate…
Just do me a favor…
Keep me not to get fully blind…
I need to see her…
At least…her shadow…
Im pleasing you…

My Love where are you…
U don’t want to change your mind…
You don’t want to even look at me…
Don’t even come closer…
Im in full of sin…
Just stay there...where I can see you shadow…

This heaviest sand which sticking on my face
Not let me raise my face to see…
The last image of my angel…

Ohh god…its really heavy…

My love…
Im sorry…
Im leaving you my love…
I will not be there to listen you laughter anymore…
To bug you to see your childish anger anymore…

Im going to miss your eyes on my screen…
Which makes my every day bright…

Im remembering our days…
Which we were in heaven…

It will be ever fresh greenly…
In my all next birth…

Sorry my love…
I will be not there to make you feel better
When ever u feel down…

Yaa im just here…
Cos I already failed on it…


I did all for make us best…
But im failed…

My love…
Its sooooo far im walking alone…
But im still visibly alive…

Im sorry…
I cant give you back anything u gifted me…
Your smile your sights your songs…
And…
FERO EVER your heavenly love…
I take those with me…

Those are only for me…
No one can own it…
Even you also cant own it…
Cos those are the gifts I received….
Its just MINE….

But also…
Its…you given…

Please don’t ask back….

I have only those with me…
To be feel mine…
Nothing else…

Im leavening my love…

Don’t change your mind…
If u changed I cant stay at mid there…
Cos its just one way im walking…
Its already im reaching the destination….

I can’t return…

Im not going alone now….
I have all your blessd…
All your spirit of your pure love…
Which you given ONLY for me…
For ever…

Ohh god….
Atles can you hear me…?

Send me anyone…
To keep my body…
To protect from these eagles…
Who waiting to have their meal eagerly...
Till my sinful soul leave this body…

I don’t want to feel the pain on my body
Till my soul hold my sweet memories
Which I ever received….
I cant see those getting in to my blood
Before I fly high and safe those…

My love…
I couldnt see anything now...
I imagin only your ever chrarming face
With its own mark smil...
I couldnt listing anyhthing...
I imagin only your ever lovely words
Wich i ever hear in my rae lobe...
I couldnt feel anytihng...
I imagin only your fist and last touch..
The ever soft i felt in my life...

This is my last chance to say…
I LOVE YOU…

Im leaving you my angel...

I will be waiting with all full of my love…
If you changed your mind…

- Karthik -

10 comments:

Divya said...

Lenghthy......but awesome:))

அ.மு.செய்யது said...

Felt relaxed and pleasant reading your poem !!!!
keep writing mate !!!

PoornimaSaran said...

:)

அதிரை ஜமால் said...

நீண்டு இருக்கின்றது

உங்கள் வரிகளும்

காதலும் ...

காத்திருத்தலும் ...

Karthik Krishna said...

thankx divya...:)

Karthik Krishna said...

than you very much
அ.மு.செய்யது

Karthik Krishna said...

//:)//

:)

Karthik Krishna said...

//நீண்டு இருக்கின்றது

உங்கள் வரிகளும்

காதலும் ...

காத்திருத்தலும் ...//

மிக்க நன்றி ஜமால்..

Ferreira-Pinto said...

I liked reading your poem of suffer/agony/last chance.

A bit to long, but really good.

And yes, there are things that are needed to be said everyday grabbing the moment!

Thank you for your visit and comment.

Karthik Krishna said...

thnkx man

//And yes, there are things that are needed to be said everyday grabbing the moment!//

yaa thats true....
thankx ferreira....